#tdc4193 #ds106 Generals gathered in their masses / Peering through their opera glasses (?)

Audrey Watters‏ said, “repetition of the word ‘masses’ in the first 2 lines of Black Sabbath’s War Pigs is the most disappointing failure of imagination in the history of rhyme.”

So let’s give Geezer some help. What else could he have used for the second line?

Rhyme on.

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This Daily Create has been recycled from previously published ones:

• #tdc2023 Generals gathered in their masses / Peering through their opera glasses (?) (Jul 24, 2017)